UPSC daily answer writing day 3 answer for evaluation out of 15
Day 3:- Here's my answer to today's question. Feel free to evaluate it, point out its shortcomings, and share your suggestions in the comment section so we can discuss & learn together. If possible rate this answer out of 15.
AlluriSitaramanRaju · 3d ago
@drmahimabhardwaj @The_hitman @sayantan-9475 @aspirant-6006 @samindher
The_Hitman · 3d ago
@nationfirst If this is written within stipulated time then excellent efforts, just avoid headings in question format.
Madhavi Raj · 3d ago
Very good ans
AlluriSitaramanRaju · 3d ago
@rajmadhavi thank you 🥂
Nilmani Tripathi · 3d ago
I think you have crossed words limit
AlluriSitaramanRaju · 3d ago
@kaleenbhaiya I'll try to keep that in mind next time!! Thanks 🥂
Arjun · 3d ago
Excellent Introduction and conclusion….but the overall body feels bulky…try to minimise it as it will take a lot of time while u could have written in short….rest inclusions of articles and citing relevant terms are extra marks gainers.
AlluriSitaramanRaju · 3d ago
@aspirant-6006 yes, you’re right. Even while writing, I felt the same I should have been able to complete this answer in around 11–12 minutes , I'll keep that in mind & thanks for your suggestion 🥂
Dr. M Bhardwaj · 2d ago
Your answer is organized well with headings, relevant constitutional articles and a balanced look at both the good things and the bad things about womens reservation. The part, about what comes and the conclusion is also right.. You need to include specific examples and numbers to back up your points. Go into the challenges deeply instead of just naming them. Make your ideas more real and useful. Overall your basic knowledge is good. Work on adding facts, examples and deeper thinking to make your answer better.
AlluriSitaramanRaju · 2d ago
@drmahimabhardwaj thank you so much for your valuable feedback. I’ll do my best to incorporate your suggestions into my upcoming answers