1. Good on IBC structure 🙌🏼
2. Good intro
3. Good on quoting names
Few of short comings i want you work around
Don't explain in ex : Earlier teachings of bhud and jain noope just write bhudism and Jainism then proceed to explainer
Baki in your dm plz do check and reply back 🙌🏼🤝😊
Parul · 4d ago
@samindher ohh thankyou
Samindher Reddy · 4d ago
Dmed you the 📜feedback 🤝😊
Machiavelli · 4d ago
Nice answer..
Parul · 4d ago
@aspirant-9187 Tysm
A
AlluriSitaramanRaju · 4d ago
good structure and covers relevant historical and contemporary dimensions, some points need stronger examples and analytical depth, while the nuclear family argument seems weak(thoda overgeneralised laga). Focus on explaining your points rather than just listing them & make the conclusion more balanced.
Parul · 3d ago
@nationfirst over explanation takes more space than needed thats y kept crisp
ONKAR · 3d ago
15/15
🎯🔖💅💅
Parul · 3d ago
@aspirant-2087 Lol
Lucky · 3d ago
7
Parul · 2d ago
@Lucky okayy
Shikhar Srivastava · 3d ago
5/15
Fact based intro expected for example ---
Indian society draws strength from Sarva Dharma Sambhava, the principle of equal respect for all religions, fostering harmony amid diversity.
Conclusion to generic ❌
Conclude it more in what's famous PM's surrounding like-
India’s future depends on transforming its civilisational ideals of वसुधैव कुटुम्बकम् into everyday practices of coexistence and compassion.
Body is good ..
Caveri · 4d ago
Bdhya
Parul · 4d ago
@caveripun ♥️
Kavya Guna · 4d ago
8 , overall good
Parul · 4d ago
@kavyag ty
Samindher Reddy · 4d ago
1. Good on IBC structure 🙌🏼 2. Good intro 3. Good on quoting names Few of short comings i want you work around Don't explain in ex : Earlier teachings of bhud and jain noope just write bhudism and Jainism then proceed to explainer Baki in your dm plz do check and reply back 🙌🏼🤝😊
Parul · 4d ago
@samindher ohh thankyou
Samindher Reddy · 4d ago
Dmed you the 📜feedback 🤝😊
Machiavelli · 4d ago
Nice answer..
Parul · 4d ago
@aspirant-9187 Tysm
AlluriSitaramanRaju · 4d ago
good structure and covers relevant historical and contemporary dimensions, some points need stronger examples and analytical depth, while the nuclear family argument seems weak(thoda overgeneralised laga). Focus on explaining your points rather than just listing them & make the conclusion more balanced.
Parul · 3d ago
@nationfirst over explanation takes more space than needed thats y kept crisp
ONKAR · 3d ago
15/15 🎯🔖💅💅
Parul · 3d ago
@aspirant-2087 Lol
Lucky · 3d ago
7
Parul · 2d ago
@Lucky okayy
Shikhar Srivastava · 3d ago
5/15 Fact based intro expected for example --- Indian society draws strength from Sarva Dharma Sambhava, the principle of equal respect for all religions, fostering harmony amid diversity. Conclusion to generic ❌ Conclude it more in what's famous PM's surrounding like- India’s future depends on transforming its civilisational ideals of वसुधैव कुटुम्बकम् into everyday practices of coexistence and compassion. Body is good ..
Parul · 2d ago
@aspirant-62928 Okay