4.5/10
U need to end it with a conclusion
Conservation relevance is underdeveloped — points like urbanization, encroachment, climate change are mentioned but not well-linked to archaeology
Nina Bhide · 5mo ago
Write the introduction and conclusion first in rough work.
Stick strictly to ~150 words (count them).
Use keywords: tangible evidence, material culture, cultural continuity, sustainable conservation.
Practice time management: 7–8 minutes max.
MJ Shetty🍀 · 5mo ago
A well-structured but average answer with relevant examples and good presentation. However, it lacks analytical depth, value addition, and recent examples, with a few language issues.
Pratiksha Rathi · 5mo ago
Good structure and relevance to both parts of the question, but the archaeological section is too generic and misses landmark discoveries like Ashokan inscriptions, Harappan seals, megalithic sites, etc.
The heritage conservation part lacks contemporary examples (ASI, UNESCO sites, heritage laws) and the answer would benefit from a small flowchart/map for better presentation.
Smriti Kaul · 5mo ago
Please work on the structure. IBC have SPECIFIC marks allotted
Smriti Kaul · 5mo ago
Please work on the structure. IBC have SPECIFIC marks allotted
Assessin-Mapiin-UPSC · 4mo ago
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Parul · 5mo ago
4.5/10 U need to end it with a conclusion Conservation relevance is underdeveloped — points like urbanization, encroachment, climate change are mentioned but not well-linked to archaeology
Nina Bhide · 5mo ago
Write the introduction and conclusion first in rough work. Stick strictly to ~150 words (count them). Use keywords: tangible evidence, material culture, cultural continuity, sustainable conservation. Practice time management: 7–8 minutes max.
MJ Shetty🍀 · 5mo ago
A well-structured but average answer with relevant examples and good presentation. However, it lacks analytical depth, value addition, and recent examples, with a few language issues.
Pratiksha Rathi · 5mo ago
Good structure and relevance to both parts of the question, but the archaeological section is too generic and misses landmark discoveries like Ashokan inscriptions, Harappan seals, megalithic sites, etc. The heritage conservation part lacks contemporary examples (ASI, UNESCO sites, heritage laws) and the answer would benefit from a small flowchart/map for better presentation.
Smriti Kaul · 5mo ago
Please work on the structure. IBC have SPECIFIC marks allotted
Smriti Kaul · 5mo ago
Please work on the structure. IBC have SPECIFIC marks allotted
Assessin-Mapiin-UPSC · 4mo ago
Try assessin.in it's free for first two evaluations and let me know the feedback Hope it helps 🤞