Definition in intro is incomplete
First part me some cases mention kr skte ho where some pressure groups involved.
Conclusion abrupt hai, challenges you can present in diagramtic form bt conclusion be more comprehensive, connect to need of public participation for 2070 goal.
Nina Bhide · 6d ago
@The_hitman Yeah i also found these shortcomings, this is the topic of Air 1 aditya
Rudraksh · 6d ago
overall it's good
Nina Bhide · 5d ago
@rudrakshpower yup
Yuvi patil · 6d ago
Overall answer is good, But mention the points with examples first, followed by the remaining points without examples.
Samindher Reddy · 6d ago
Should have opened with a case rather an article since it's environment issue
2.AaRAY mumbai is not a model of Political Socialization it's a Protest and a petition by locals in Bombay HC
3. Alleged against wildlife is too vague might have mentioned old known names like Chipkoo andolan
4. FCRA licence cancellation fits the challenge section aswell rather naming reports
No mention of NGT which can be corner stone point
Article is good point for an intro not a great point conclusion closing the loop with he intro 🙌🏼
Good on IBC structure with one liner explainers / point 🙌🏼
Good on examples like narmada etc
Radhika Singh · 6d ago
Good
Nina Bhide · 6d ago
@curiousradz ok
Abhishek Shaw · 6d ago
Maza aa gya... Achcha hai 💯
Nina Bhide · 6d ago
@Abhishek2005 👌🏻
The_Hitman · 6d ago
Definition in intro is incomplete First part me some cases mention kr skte ho where some pressure groups involved. Conclusion abrupt hai, challenges you can present in diagramtic form bt conclusion be more comprehensive, connect to need of public participation for 2070 goal.
Nina Bhide · 6d ago
@The_hitman Yeah i also found these shortcomings, this is the topic of Air 1 aditya
Rudraksh · 6d ago
overall it's good
Nina Bhide · 5d ago
@rudrakshpower yup
Yuvi patil · 6d ago
Overall answer is good, But mention the points with examples first, followed by the remaining points without examples.
Samindher Reddy · 6d ago
Should have opened with a case rather an article since it's environment issue 2.AaRAY mumbai is not a model of Political Socialization it's a Protest and a petition by locals in Bombay HC 3. Alleged against wildlife is too vague might have mentioned old known names like Chipkoo andolan 4. FCRA licence cancellation fits the challenge section aswell rather naming reports No mention of NGT which can be corner stone point Article is good point for an intro not a great point conclusion closing the loop with he intro 🙌🏼 Good on IBC structure with one liner explainers / point 🙌🏼 Good on examples like narmada etc
Himanshu · 6d ago
Structure +knowledge base Accha Answer Hai💯
Nina Bhide · 5d ago
@himanshu0007 Thankyou 🫡